by Cherise Jan 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Come on, load on the hair spray! |
I loved this |
by Darien
Ah!! For a second there I thought you were trying to control my mind. Well, this was a very good effect in this poem, you wrote to the audience, rather than for them. That was really creative. |
by x.Athame.x
Interesting idea, concept and presentation. I did like it though. :) It flowed well, and had pretty good imagery too. Nice job on this piece. *5/5 |
WOW this absoluetly blew me away. Haha leave it to you to write something about this! You should definately show it to Trevor, I'm sure he could relate lmao. I really did like this, it flowed really well and i reminded me of bad sixty's movies haha. Great work. |