Wow! very explicit, i loved it.

You're 14....?

Well then lol very detailed i'd say. very nicely written. its actually really good =D screw that last comment aye, 14?? who gives a shit..... HAHA we all do it. definatly adding yu to my favourites .xx

Datz wat im sayn it shod alwayz go down lik dat

Wow.........

I love this poem thnkz for the comment anyway ur an awsome poet keep it up!!!!!!!! =)

Wow. this was good. 14 hmm. good description.

Good poem...dang..all week huh? talking about being lady luck!! =D

Wow. Are you sure you're only 14? Haha!
Wow very well written, Made me hot.
Thanks for suggesting I read this one. And thanks for the boost.. that guy that posted before you did kinda make me wonder if my poem was any good.
But wow you're is def a 5/5.
Keep it up.
-Lisa

ThiS writinG, expressionS are tO bE reaD durinG nighT hourS sO aS tO feeL betteR tO onE iN seX worK outS... stilL itS nicE anD interestinG..... I aM jusT enterinG mY 18 yearS, I feeL verY hoT whilE readinG iT....

luzaN

I really enjoyed this poem...thanks for the recommadation...keep up the awsome work....

Dayum that some hot shit right there ahahah =]

goodjob hun keep it up ya

A very well written poem. As already noted above, very descriptive, but just enough... You are an excellent writer and I hope to see more from you soon.