This poem is great! it's so sad n emotional n angry i just loved it, there were little grammer mistakes n bits that didnt make sense but apart from that it was flawless!!

Oh i think your right about the famillies being broken apart cos of rape, in fact, i know your right.. =(
But back to the poem, such a powerful piece told in a matter-of-fact way which indicates how common this act actually is which saddens me =(
But excellent write as always
5/5
*Gem*

That is such an emotional poem.. I started to tear up... but it was beautifully written all the same.. Great write..
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Hey beautiful poem! very sad!!! Well worded and good rhyming! thanks for your sweet comment! your very talented aswell!
love mel

A sad and emotion filled write that touches the heart. The flow and rhyme seem a touch forced, but not so much so that they take away from the content. Wonderful job. My favorite lines had to have been:

We guessed to late,
that they had to sedate,
and now she gone,
and taken her un-born son.

Great work on this piece. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. It truly means a lot to me. Best wishes and blessed be. *Athame

I think this is an amazing poem. its a 5/5. great job!

The title caught my eye and the structure and plot were amazing. i think the first stanza is my favorite, it opens the poem very well, and all the way thru u keep the reader's attention.
thx for commenting on my poem,
much love,

sore.

I love this poem!
it's brilliant, your such an excellent writer!! keep it up.
xx

Hey! beautiful poem!!! very emotional!!!! i love the last two stanzas! well done! love Mel