Suicide

by Summer   Jan 16, 2007


OK so i wrote this in the hospital and i was kinda loupie so don't make fun lol no one has Sean it yet. its kinda weired but i guess it was how i felt.

Love, the feeling that i once had for you
Hate, the feeling that has gone in its place
Hope, Something i have deep down inside
Fear, the reason that i haven't let go

you changed me, and it wasn't for the best
dependent is how i became, i needed you
pushing and pulling me twards the edge
and i saw no other way.

that final push, thats all it took
i didn't try to brake my own fall
the bottom was hard, i could no longer walk
opening my eyes and all i saw was a blur

people yelling. people screaming. Bright lights
needles poking. the smell of vomit
black paste forced down my thought
groggy and confused, pain i no longer felt

scared, i don't no where i am.
i open my eyes, a new day.
pain is back, i don't want to move.
theres no way things can get worse

I reached the bottom
my screams where finally herd.
help is on its way.
and i can have hope for my HAPPY ENDING
By Summer Lawrence

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  • 17 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    I didnt think it was stupid at all. i thought it was really good and tru to heart thats how i felt,i understand, great work but really sad.. hope ur ok
    xx

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