This poem is really great and I love the way you wrote it. There is so much meaning and love inside of the words - great job 5/5 miss you 2

EXCELLENT TINNA!!
"For you're memory is all I have, You were and still are my precious pride"

SOUNDS AS IF SOMEONE VERY DEAR TO YOU HAS LEFT HIS PAINFUL SCAR OF MEMORY FROM WHICH YOU ARE STILL UNABLE TO COME OUT !!
5/5