Comments : Seasonal Cinquains

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I love the way you describe the seasons in this write. This was so nice to read! Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    See this is why i love your poems i always learn something new "Cinquain " not to use it in a sentence lol :)))

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Ive down this with colos its called Rainbow...i think lol. ice job hard to do

    lis

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #3:

    Heehee, I loved the ending...it almost rapped the end back to the biggining without repeating anything. Great job once again :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    So im not a fan of nature poems.. but this is beautiful it has great flow.. i reallty like the whole structure of the poem.. !!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very creative.I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!!

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely job babesy! I loved it! And also...No problem. I heard what you went through and I just had to write something for you. I'm glad you liked it. :]
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    By the way...sorry to bring my pain up while you're in pain but Jake asked out my best friend and she's gonna say yes. :[ Everytime I listen to a break up song, I cry. :[ So sadd!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by bc

    One Word "WonderFul", Reminds me Of A Rainbow For Some Reason =S, Anyhow I Love It, To Write A Poem About The Seasons Is A Beautiful Way To Go..=), and Sorry About Your Nana, I Know I Said It Before In Your Other Poem "More Than Just A Nana" But Who Cares..Your Nana Is Probably Watching Over You..=)

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Brilliant indeed, i wonder how i survived w/o reading ur poems.. :o)

    Missed u a lot

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    A very nice Cinquain... I find different styles of poetry tricky to write but You have made this look easy and have described the seasons beautifully... Well done 5/5 xx