by Cindy
I love the way you describe the seasons in this write. This was so nice to read! Cindy |
by Krzysztof J
See this is why i love your poems i always learn something new "Cinquain " not to use it in a sentence lol :))) |
Ive down this with colos its called Rainbow...i think lol. ice job hard to do |
by Midnight Sun
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So im not a fan of nature poems.. but this is beautiful it has great flow.. i reallty like the whole structure of the poem.. !! |
by Tom Swart
Very creative.I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. Bravo!! |
Lovely job babesy! I loved it! And also...No problem. I heard what you went through and I just had to write something for you. I'm glad you liked it. :] |
By the way...sorry to bring my pain up while you're in pain but Jake asked out my best friend and she's gonna say yes. :[ Everytime I listen to a break up song, I cry. :[ So sadd! |
by bc
One Word "WonderFul", Reminds me Of A Rainbow For Some Reason =S, Anyhow I Love It, To Write A Poem About The Seasons Is A Beautiful Way To Go..=), and Sorry About Your Nana, I Know I Said It Before In Your Other Poem "More Than Just A Nana" But Who Cares..Your Nana Is Probably Watching Over You..=) |
Brilliant indeed, i wonder how i survived w/o reading ur poems.. :o) |
by donna
A very nice Cinquain... I find different styles of poetry tricky to write but You have made this look easy and have described the seasons beautifully... Well done 5/5 xx |