Gem,
This is so sad. Life is not fair it seems to take the best people from our lives. I have you and your Nan in my prayers. Thinking of you your friend Cindy

Aww sweetie! I totally understand! Writing totally helps though! I hope you're doing okay! What exactly is wrong with her, if you don't mind me asking? If you don't wanna tell me, it's okay. I hope you are both okay. Good luck darling and lovely write!
xoxo

Ooh this is soo sweet, i know what you are going through... keep holding on! i love all of your poems, they are all soo great! 5/5 always!

Awwww wow Gem thats so lovely i really felt the emotions i did nearly cry then im either a softy or that was a heart felt poem that hits you with emotion from beginning to end, ide say it were the second one =]
loved it as always 5/5
~*~Jen~*~

Awww...this is so sweet and I can relate to this piece. It's very good in flow and rhyme. Touches the heart! :)
And I wanted to say THANK YOU for choosing to do me in that contest where you pick a poet. You said there were two of us. Who was the other you were thinking of? Curiousity I guess cuz I can think of a few I'd love to do..just wondering!
Thank you SO MUCH! It means tons!
:) *smiling widely*
Charisma*

This is nicely writen! i really like the flow... very good! 5/5
Yes, I'm 14... thanks for checkin' out my poems.
-Marina.

Awww hunni. i fully understand this. and you just got to stay strong and with her family around her she knows that she has to stay strong. but remember if its her time to go it must have been the right time. you are amazing and keep up the good work

-chelseaa;

ps. thank you for the sweet comment. your poems are way better then mine but it makes me so happy you like mine. keep your work up and thank you so much (L)

Hey hun a very touching piece. lot of emotion coming through. this poem was really sad. if u need nething im only an email away. xx

Bad things happen to good people :( its a great poem and i feel for your nanna :((

The last lne was akward for me, think hug could be left out but thtas just me. great message awn d i know what u mean i do that myself sumtimes i kare so much for my love i forget myself..nice job

lissa

Comment #2:

This is really beautiful! You are so good even with subjects many find hard to write about (including myself). You really are extremely talented. :)
~Midnight Sun

Awww.... this is soo sad but really sweet.. i love it.. nice simple rhymes and great flow!! keep it up!

Hey ur poem is rlly great... wud u mind commenting on mi writtin pieces just search for the author 'beautifulxhate' i got a fair few hope u like

I like your style. simple ryhmes, but very appealing. its.... uncluttered. nice.

This is an amazing poem. My pawpaw died from cancer 4 years ago and he was the best person in the world. He meant as much to me like you nan did. You really have talent keep writing 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Your poem is really good if you whant to talk to me ther is my e-mail kimberley-stockdale@hotmail.co.uk love to hear from you soon

Your poem is really good if you whant to talk to me ther is my e-mail kimberley-stockdale@hotmail.co.uk love to hear from you soon

Ok see this poem is tru in a way but uc. its not life that isnt fair bcz life dosnt chose the pths u go down. u do!! so stop blamin life for bad things that happen in life. What happens wen u score a winnin goal or u just won the lottory...r u gena blame life for that. r u gena say life is sooo fair NO! ull say wow am i luky. but wen thngs start to turn for the worse its lifes fault...

Wow I really feel for you I nearly cried reading thi piece you are such a good poet I dont know where you come up with such talent but it was good- Kaila

You make me think about my life and my grandmas death.Losing a love one is a tragic time.Thank you for giving us such a great read.