"I wish I could make you well again
With a healing hug and a kiss"
Very heartfelt and a wonderful poem. You are right, life isn't fair at all. Great poem! 5/5!

~Kat~

The first line caught my attention, and I eagerly read on. Fortunately, I found delight in this both beautiful, and devestating poem. The rhyme and flow present this sad dedication as something wonderful.
Well done.

Sweetie i really understand where your coming from i was going through the same and sad to say my grandmother past away 5 years ago the day after christmas so i understand with all my heart life takes the best people u have away from u.

I really liked this it made me wanna cry ....

Beatiful poem, pain is a unavoildable
part of life. and for some reason some of us get more than our fair
share, thats why i'am so glad this poetry site is here, Its 11: 30 at night
and instead of sleeping i'am here
writting to you hoping i can find
something that can make you feel
better .

I hope my bad spelling gave you a smile

Though now the extreme has already hpnd...yet i could feel the way u hv tried through your lovely poems and prayers......and yes...life is not that fair at all.

very nicely expressed dear

all the best and take care

I love the way You express your feelings through poetry, your poems are full of emotion and so nicely written... Once again well done on a wonderful job 5/5 xx

Awwe, i know exactly how you feel. great poem by the way! but i just hope everything is okaay. Best wishes and i know that God take the best people. So your nan must have been pretty amazing.