This was truly heartfelt. I was rooting for ya right atthe end. This piece shows how emotions run through us. Almost as if they are cycled when one feeling passes it is replaced buy another, whether it be more tame or forceful.

I can so relate to parts of this piece.

My ears have become restless
with their constant waiting
and I am completely engrossed
in a wave of impatience,
the kind that nauseates over time

Captures so well waiting for the phone to ring. Great ending....glad you didn't answer! 5/5

Great write.
Sure enough,
it's still there
buzzing alone
alone without conversation
I know i have wished for the phone to ring with someone there. Picking it up to make sure it is still working. Excellent job! 5/5

This is really good, comment on my poems too

I enjoyed it. I love the realization

This is gorgeous. i love it. good job

Sometimes the thing you want the most, is the thing you really dont want at all. This poem is the best stating of that, and it is very educational in the way that it kind of makes people know that they dont have to put up with other peoples sh*t.

This was rele good..good job honey!

Another emotional, telling, introspective masterpiece. Beautiful.

The game....

Hey.
oh my god, i can really relate to this! like its really awesome. i hope to read more from you. take care
peace

WOW! You are sooo good at free verse. Wish I could offer a suggestion, but I can't. It's good as is. You have a way of turning simple ideas or situations into something deeper. It's amazing! I just love how you can take it and make the person feel it second by second. Great job and congrats on second in my contest!
Charisma*

An unexpected ending - but perfect. :-)

Oh lovely punchline! What a mystery we human beings are!

This piece intruigued me. The title attracted me to it, but the opening hooked me. Doubting hello...it's a concept that isn't usually grasped until it's too late. Very nice. I like how at the end the phone rings, you realize it's him, but you don't answer. Nice flow. 5/5