Just Hold On.

by Teria   Jan 16, 2007


I'm only asking you
this one tiny thing
I promise I will too.

I'm only searching
for a long lost love
I promise I will find it.

I'monly wondering
upon this dusty earth,
promise I'll come home.

I'm only learning
about myself,
promise I'll find out who I am.

And, in the mean time..
I'm only need just one thing,
for you to.. just hold on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh this was beautifully written.
    I think you meant 'I' instead of 'I'm' in the last stanza, second line.
    Apart from that you truly did a wonderful job with this.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Good job. i really like the idea of this poem. i think that the 4th stanza doesnt flow very well. and the last ones a little sketchy.

    good job though hun

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