Loving hurts

by Leanne   Jan 16, 2007


Your always on my mind
When i sleep i dream of you
I can't seem to shake these feelings
I'm forever feeling blue

I'd give anything for one last kiss
Feel your hand in mine
To hear you calling out my name
Would make me feel divine

I've tried ever so hard
Believe me when I say
These emotions I am feeling
I tried to lock away

I can't seem to let you go
I want to but it hurts
Even though, at breaking hearts
You seem like quite the expert

What we had was special
I felt safe lying in your arms
We've lost all that now
From the moment you brought me harm

My heart bleeds in pain
My soul is crying out
Will this heartache ever stop?
This I highly doubt.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    This was really good. It flowed pretty well.. Some words were a bit cliche..Like Jess said.. I agree. I dont really like the word 'blue' used in the case of sadness..it's cliche & deffinitley un-orginal. It was still really good though. Very sad. & I can relate to it as well, as i'm sure a lot of other people can too.

    Two things:

    Your always on my mind [You're.. again]

    And remember to capatalize your I's. :]

    Other than that, awesome job. Keep it up, dear.. You're headed to a great start. :]

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    This one is good too ... not as good as the other one that almost made me come to tears but still really really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''My heart bleeds in pain
    My soul is crying out
    Will this heartache ever stop?
    This I highly doubt. ''

    My favourite ever ever stanza!
    I'm not sure if this is aimed at someone? o.O
    But if it is, then I have some advice: FORGET HIM. Lmao
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thats so sad =(

    "I can't seem to let you go
    I want to but it hurts
    Even though, at breaking hearts
    You seem like quite the expert"

    We always seem to be attracted to bad boys at one point in our lives. And although it hurts, we still pine away
    5/5
    *Gem*

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