Thats so sad =(

"I can't seem to let you go
I want to but it hurts
Even though, at breaking hearts
You seem like quite the expert"

We always seem to be attracted to bad boys at one point in our lives. And although it hurts, we still pine away
5/5
*Gem*

''My heart bleeds in pain
My soul is crying out
Will this heartache ever stop?
This I highly doubt. ''

My favourite ever ever stanza!
I'm not sure if this is aimed at someone? o.O
But if it is, then I have some advice: FORGET HIM. Lmao
xx

This one is good too ... not as good as the other one that almost made me come to tears but still really really good

This was really good. It flowed pretty well.. Some words were a bit cliche..Like Jess said.. I agree. I dont really like the word 'blue' used in the case of sadness..it's cliche & deffinitley un-orginal. It was still really good though. Very sad. & I can relate to it as well, as i'm sure a lot of other people can too.

Two things:

Your always on my mind [You're.. again]

And remember to capatalize your I's. :]

Other than that, awesome job. Keep it up, dear.. You're headed to a great start. :]

Bri.x