Do you see now?

by angelina   Jan 16, 2007


You tiptoe the sharp razor,
you say you want die.
You will abide,
your plans of suicide.

He has caused to much pain,
and you can't fall out now.
You realize your not sane,
as you take a single vow.

This is the end,
it's the only way out,
Please don't spend,
your life on this doubt.

Forget about us,
didn't you.
He is lust,
we are true.

For every tear you cry,
we cry ten more.
Every time we try,
you slam the door.

You say we don't know,
we don't understand.
Your the one who shows,
yet we walk hand in hand.

You are so selfish,
don't try to deny.
Just have your wish,
go ahead and die.

But just remember,
we will die too.
Our hearts will splinter,
because we love you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Im not gunna lie... reading this poem makes me want to cry... just because i know you wrote it for me. and that it is pretty true....

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This one had a lot of emotion, very powerful choice of words. Great write! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    Well done! I really felt connected to this piece! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. 5/5. Such a good poem! I liked how you rhymed this. Such a great write!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Spidergirl Jess

    Very good, i like how it can be used for someone who feels like dying but it tells the emotions of the ones that love them also. 5/5