by angelina Jan 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You tiptoe the sharp razor, |
Im not gunna lie... reading this poem makes me want to cry... just because i know you wrote it for me. and that it is pretty true.... |
by Cella Bella
This one had a lot of emotion, very powerful choice of words. Great write! 5/5 |
by lala
Well done! I really felt connected to this piece! 5/5 |
Wow. 5/5. Such a good poem! I liked how you rhymed this. Such a great write!! |
Very good, i like how it can be used for someone who feels like dying but it tells the emotions of the ones that love them also. 5/5 |