This is so sad, really effective poem i loved it

Your poems are very intense and so emotional, very well written.
5/5

I really like this. I can feel the emotion throughout the entire poem. I think it brings up many good points and I can relate to it in many ways.. Good job

Very good, i like how it can be used for someone who feels like dying but it tells the emotions of the ones that love them also. 5/5

Wow. 5/5. Such a good poem! I liked how you rhymed this. Such a great write!!

Well done! I really felt connected to this piece! 5/5

This one had a lot of emotion, very powerful choice of words. Great write! 5/5

marcella

Im not gunna lie... reading this poem makes me want to cry... just because i know you wrote it for me. and that it is pretty true....