Hey just wanted to thnk you for your comment and say that this is a good poem. i can understand the feelings you have in it because its a powerfull one keep it up mabey one day people all over the world will be reading your poems. ya never know

That is an awesome poem, really dark and deep, lots of meaning in here...

DAmnnnnnnnnnnnn"""" love it . these
kind are WOW""""""""""""""
words can descrive how i feel when
i read this. maybe you think this
ain't your best but its one of them.
i love the part < A line for every
tear, A line to banish fear, A line to
bring you near, A line to get me out
of here> nice""""

Maybe this isn't your best poem, but it's the best i've ever read