My love for you is forever

by Michael   Jan 16, 2007


While I stand on that cliff over looking the ocean
With a red rose in my hand and a love note in my other.
I listen to the waves pounding below me with such power
As it keeps on beating the rocks. it’s a never ending bond between
Them just as it is with my love for you. Then I look up at the
Night sky and see the star that we picked out. I look at it for
A while as I think about you. It was cold out that night and I
I felt so alone in the world, and then I feel the warmth of your Love,
And your presents beside me but when I look over my shoulder
You weren't there but it was the feeling that you were that mattered
To me. With the rose in my hand I bring it up to the be at the same level
As my heart and I say my vows to you as I pluck a pedal each time I say it. And throw them to the ocean. And as I wait for you to come I take my prized possession and wait for you. As I look to my left I see you standing there with tears in your eyes and my note to you in your hand. You tell me its beautiful but I say you are and nothing can match your beauty. As I hand you my white rose I put all my love in it for you so that it would last for ever.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ephemera

    Hey Michael. This was good. I just am wondering how did the rose turn from red to white? Was the rose red at first or was it white but stained red from all the love that the guy had for the girl?

    Haha just wondering because it would be awesome if the rose was white, yet red. I guess it would depend on the type of rose. But the guy plucking the petals from the red rose to reveal the white centre could symbolize the purity in the love that the two share.

    This poem was a good and I liked how it did not ryhme because sometimes rhyme doesn't work. I felt the emotions in the poem and they were strong. I just would recommend a little editing.

    "And your presents beside me"
    [And your presence beside me]

    I guess that's it. Your poem is beautiful and honest. To me it seems to come from the heart and I really love poems like that. Keep that honesty.

    Astryd

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael

    Hey would you plz leave me a comment telling me why u did/or didn't like my poems thnks

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