Mommy, you have gone too far this time

by angelina   Jan 16, 2007


We are a normal family,
we fight, cry, and love.
But then you truly see,
what hides under the glove.

CraZy is just a word,
until you see the action.
Everything is blurred,
don't look at what's happened.

It started at a yell,
then her eyes changed.
I can tell,
that things will never be the same.

Words of pain,
are yelled at random.
You can't tame,
something with such action.

It's gone too far,
please stop.
I reach out for her,
and feel a painful drop.

What hurt the most,
is not the drop.
It was the dose,
of realizing she wouldn't stop.

You say i still yell,
screaming your fears.
I can't even tell,
if any one will appear.

My face turns blue,
no breath in my throat.
What do i do,
to stop this choke.

The breath comes back,
there is swinging of arms.
Who stopped this act,
and engaged the alarm.

She yelled at him,
promised divorce.
Our world grew dim,
as she walked out the door.

What hides under the glove,
you now truly see.
We cried, fought, and loved,
what a family.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Two Faced Angel

    You did an excellent job on this. I can really feel what your poem says. Everything it says is now happening to me and I'm just hoping that it won't grow worse.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    You did an excellent job on this poem , it's a work of art , loved it, i feel the pain you must have within yourself, i know your not alone ,trust me, been there done that ,hope you read one of mine and you will see,,,,Thanks for sharing,,,Tracy
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really sad:[ but wonderful writing! you are a really good writer. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Ok, this is really sad, because i know what you're talking about, and i'm so sorry you had to go through it. As for the poem, some things didn't exactly rhyme, but some things did. That's not bad, it's just a little confusing. But that's really all, i really like this poem!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Some of the rhyming in this poem seemed a little strained and off, but all in all it flowed together and kept on the consistent theme, which was excellent. Great job! 5/5

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