What a powerful poem. You have done a excellent job! These kinds of poems are the hardest to write. The raw feelings of pain can be felt in every word. Take Care Cindy

Its like you took the words ri ght out of my mouth this is a grate poem i like it alot ( oh and thanks for the comment).
love ya ashley

Another sad poem, you can feel the emotion come out in your words.
Another 5/5

Wow. i really like this because it really does show how families hide stuff like this. My father almost killed me kind of in the same way, so i can relate to this in a great way.. Great job

I liked how it flowed so well. keep up the good work!

Wow what a sad sad poem. i hope this doesn't have to do with you. but if it does keep your head up and stay strong. great work tho

-chelseaa;

I know what you mean... great poem though.

Wow...This was heartbreaking.
But beautifully written.
The deph and emotion behind the words really shine.
The imagery was breathtaking.
Excellent work on such a hard subject.

Some of the rhyming in this poem seemed a little strained and off, but all in all it flowed together and kept on the consistent theme, which was excellent. Great job! 5/5

Ok, this is really sad, because i know what you're talking about, and i'm so sorry you had to go through it. As for the poem, some things didn't exactly rhyme, but some things did. That's not bad, it's just a little confusing. But that's really all, i really like this poem!
5/5

Wow this is really sad:[ but wonderful writing! you are a really good writer. keep up the good work!

You did an excellent job on this poem , it's a work of art , loved it, i feel the pain you must have within yourself, i know your not alone ,trust me, been there done that ,hope you read one of mine and you will see,,,,Thanks for sharing,,,Tracy
5/5

You did an excellent job on this. I can really feel what your poem says. Everything it says is now happening to me and I'm just hoping that it won't grow worse.

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