Great use of repetition here Jen. And a nice steady flow does wonders for the fluidness of the words.
Some heart-wrenching phrases are included here that i think a lot of poets on this site can relate to
5/5
*Gem*

This is what i feel inside, your poem hit all the right notes in my heart, its nothing short of amazing.

DAAAAAAAAAAAM girl ure good u r very taltented lol check myne what dya think