Torn

by maddie   Jan 16, 2007


He tore me.
he hurt me
he killed me inside.
he said i was his forever
but forever became never.
i cried.
i screamed.
i lied.
i died.
i hurt so badly.
he doesnt know the pain he has caused me.
i love him.
i cant live without him.
i\'m on the dock and hes on the boat.
and hes drifting farther and farther away from me.
....

guys this poem is real. this is hapening to me.
eternity ended guys.
but i didnt think it would hurt so much.

maddie

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This was a really good poem, it was so amazing n the imagery in the last lines was so clever, loved it