Comments : I don't think I want to be God

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    This poem is really cool!
    Nice flow
    Very catchy title!
    I loved the last stanza!
    Only critique i have is that cut down the amount of Is And Yous
    it really makes the poem better
    but now,the poem as it is, is great too!

    Take Care x

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Very interesting.