Drowning Bait

by LadyPearl   Jan 16, 2007


Heaven answers when in the end
No road can turn you back
And even then your path will fail
White to gold to black

Dangling, you feel lost in time
Half and half, no whole
Strength is but a dream inside
Shoe without a sole

Envy claims a spot next to lust
Such an evitable fate
Falling yet drifting down to blank
Lonely, the drowning bait

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  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    Well written! a job well done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    You have very vivid poems. So much different from mosdt unoriginal poems I seem to read more and more often.

    5.5

    never stop.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, not one of your best poems. I didn't see the creativeness like you other poetry has. It was ok though, I still enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Very good poem, the imagery was excellent, I only wished it was longer. Great job though! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This is such a good poem...you have such a consistant talent even with so many poems. Great job!
    Umm, quick question....are you planning on judging the contest any time soon? I think a lot of ppl are wondering. Thanks :)!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

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