I liked the beginning of your poem, however, toward the middle of it you kind of changed the topic, which threw me off. I did like the ending though [:

4/5

This poem is great in sum parts thats hw i feel inside

It's nice/sad poem. It's stupid people laugh when you cry. That's not supportive. But

Ik like it >3

oww yeah i know what you mean.. In that poem ;)

xxx Flynel