by Michelle18 Jan 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I love the way you make me smile, |
by Live WeLL
This is such a sweet poem.. i love the repetition throughout the entire poem.. it really helped the flow.. and i really loved the ending. amazing job!.. =) |
by Sweet lig
Wow i love the way how u wrote this one! hmm very nice, its like my bf same saying those words.. very nice and it really sweet and great feeligs! keep on writing and keep it up 5/5 |
by oldthings
Beautiful. very beautiful. the name deffinetely suits the title. it made me smile to read this one, its always refreshing and nice to read about other people being in love keeps hope burning and makes feelings already felt get stronger. great job. 5/5 loved it. |
by Kaila
Woah the words were in great choice nice job |
by Tom Swart
I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes. |