Aww. This was so touching. It was absolutely beautiful :]] I'm sure whoever you wrote this too, or about.. Is so very lucky. I find nothing wrong with this at all.. It's just perfect.

My feet are walking on air
That not even birds have flown
And my eyes still can't focus
On everything they've been shown

^^ I really loved this stanza.. It really caught my eye.. & Gave off really good imagery.

As I tilt my head towards land
I know it's a long way down
But your eyes say I'm safe
As long as you are around

^^ This was just.. a perfect ending. I really love it. It really put the whole poem together.

Amazingly beautiful job. Keep it up!

Bri.x

Captures that walking on air feeling of being in love! Nice flow, rhythm and rhyme. Very sweet! 5/5

You won 3rd place with this poem!! on me and my friends joint contest.. so please come check out the bulliten and post which poems you would like us to r/r/c as your award.. and btw very nice poem! :P