"More fish lie in the ocean
But none seem to catch my eye
Now thoughts swell within
"Is love worth another try?""

Oo, excellent imagery my dear. And yay, a happy ending! Love it =)
The other poet was Cindy cos she's like an online mother to me.
I'll get it written as soon as i can, i can't remember when the deadline was, lol
But back to the poem, amazing!
5/5
*Gem*

Absolutly amazing :)

Wow...I love it, it's so touching and so emotionally sweet! Great job .:*.

Awww. I loved this. It was so amazing. Very sweet & had a lot of emotion in it. I have absolutley nothing bad to say about this.. The ending was perfect, so very happy :] & The imagery was wonderful.

"More fish lie in the ocean
But none seem to catch my eye
Now thoughts swell within
"Is love worth another try?""

^^ That is so true for many people.. I can deffinitely relate to this. That stanza was just.. amazing.

Absolutley beautiful. Keep it up, dear.

Bri.x