by Kaila Jan 17, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
She walks down the hallway |
I really loved this poem. Although you have a couple of mistaken words, but it's still pretty goo. Great job! 5/5 |
Great, but sad. I absolutely loved it though! 5/5 |
by Melpomene
I liked this poem, i found it to have alot of emotion portrrayed, some places seemed a tiny bit forced to me but nothing enough to trash this piece. Well done i enjoyed reading this alot. ~mel |
I totaly dont think people should try to fit in and have more friends i used to be like that now i don't care if i have no one peopleither like me or don't...anyways keep it up |
by Startle Me
I don't know. |