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by Kaila   Jan 17, 2007


She walks down the hallway
Determination on her face
But there all waiting at the end
To call her a big disgrace
She forces herself to be like them
Though in her heart she knows its wrong
But maybe someday sheâ??ll be like them
One too many questions unsolved
But she tries and tries again
Feeling like sheâ??s failing herself
But she hopes to strive till the end
And never begin again
To many thoughts
She pushes herself far past the limit
Hoping and praying for the best
That someday he will notice her
But sheâ??s not there yet
Hating herself
Wishing she werweren'tt her
Disgusted by what the mirror has to say
Is there a cure?
Why does she suffer?
Why does she strive?
To be that girl she wishes for inside
Why canâ??t he see?
How terrific she could be
A few months pass
And sheâ??s finally them
He notices her now
Now and again
The one thing she lost was her best friend.

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  • I really loved this poem. Although you have a couple of mistaken words, but it's still pretty goo. Great job! 5/5

    *Cindy*

  • Great, but sad. I absolutely loved it though! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this poem, i found it to have alot of emotion portrrayed, some places seemed a tiny bit forced to me but nothing enough to trash this piece. Well done i enjoyed reading this alot. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    I totaly dont think people should try to fit in and have more friends i used to be like that now i don't care if i have no one peopleither like me or don't...anyways keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    I don't know.
    It just seems a bit forced to me.
    It's good.
    A lot of emotions in it.
    But still, forced.
    I'll give it a 4/5 :]