by Kaila Jan 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The most beautiful |
Beautiful. Clear, precise, to the point. But still so well written. The flow was pretty good! A little shaky but possibly only because of the way I read it. |
Sad, but a bit confusing. For some weird reason, there were words bunched up together. I like it though. I'll still give it a 5/5. |
Very Good. 5/5 |
by Cindy
Excellent job on your poem. Take Care Cindy |
by Jenni
This was a very nice read. it sounds like a new blossoming love, yet there is a little bit of heartbreak. i liked it. 5/5 |