Rain

by Kaila   Jan 17, 2007


The wind takes over me
The clouds begin to form
I can feel it now
Thereâ??s going to be a storm
The rain flows down
Like no other
You and me dance with each other
Then you hold me
In this tidal wave
Of glory
And spin and circles
Of mud
And when I think itâ??s going to be over
I get that smile
Of love
Then the sun starts to peak out
And Iâ??m disappointed
Until I know weâ??ll meet again
In another storm

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  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Realy good poem. Love the way it's written about the rain. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... I love this piece, it is so emotional, captivating and beautifully written. Truly wonderful poem from the beginning to the end, it touched me. I like the imagery that you portrayed here, it is very vivid and unique. The flow of the whole piece is good, too. I could just get lost in your emotions...
    Greatly done!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Great poem keep it up.....i like the part "we well meet agin in a nother strom" i think it went somthign like that but yehh greath

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is a good poem.. i thought it flowed good.
    the only problem i see is the random A things what ever that is.. lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I thought this poem was ok i was kinda confused with the last line though. i think their are alot of errors throughout this but seeing as i've read your latest ones you've improved alot. good effort though~mel

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