Even better than the first one, its so sad!!

I tell them all I remember
I see sympathy in their eyes
I try my hardest not to
But I can't help but break down and cry

My favourite stanza of the poem.
Hurry up and do part 3 and 4 :)

Great poem! Bold and interesting! 5/5

I liked the first part better, but I still like this one! I like that you made it where she feels like no one believes her story on just what she says. It is a very life situation poem and that's what i think makes both of your Bar poems great. 5/5

Awww very sad just like your last one. but it's amazingly written. 999 is for the police there? weird.. haha.
i really like this part to the story though.. and ill try to read the other parts. keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Very amazing story you have going on here.. and its very sad how long the cops make victims like this waite, I mean get over there ASAP drop everything if you have to. But it just makes it more realistic. Nice work.