Its Not Real

by timehealsallwounds6   Jan 17, 2007


Its all pretend
this is the end

it was all fake
i was the one who made the mistake

falling for something i knew wasn't real
i thought this was right i thought it was all i could feel

the feeling i have now id just a sign that i am never going to get the hint
but all those memories and all that time we spent

it keeps running through my head
all the time-morning, afternoon, and before i go to bed

i wish it was all supposed to be here
but we both know its not
its not real so not sincere

your feelings for me faded in an instant
i wish you could still feel it

but there is nothing left here, nothing left to feel

nothing else to share
i wish i could tell you that i didn't care

ill never have a chance so I'm giving up
ill just say goodbye and walk away and wish you good luck

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    Hey. I really like this poem. I know how it feels. It is sad, but well written. Well done. And thanks for the comment on my poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    I can really relate to this poem. =( very well expressed. the flow was out in some places, but the words were powerful.. i really like:
    "ill never have a chance so I'm giving up
    ill just say goodbye and walk away and wish you good luck"

    best way to finish. =)
    5/5 keep writing
    xxx