I can really relate to this poem. =( very well expressed. the flow was out in some places, but the words were powerful.. i really like:
"ill never have a chance so I'm giving up
ill just say goodbye and walk away and wish you good luck"

best way to finish. =)
5/5 keep writing
xxx

Hey. I really like this poem. I know how it feels. It is sad, but well written. Well done. And thanks for the comment on my poem.