There was a time not long ago

by Bethan   Jan 17, 2007


There was a time not long ago,
When I would've been a friend,
I would've been a person who,
on which you could depend,

There was a time not long ago,
When I would not be afraid,
My only worries would've lied,
With problems I had made,

There was a time not long ago,
When everything was good,
All was merry and contrite,
and not misunderstood,

There was a time not along ago,
When life was very clear,
Nothing else did matter,
but those that I held dear,

There was a time not long ago,
When I'd smile unlike now,
I would If I could remember,
But I've forgotten how.

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  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I really feel this poem and can relate to it.
    it very beautifully written.
    well done!!!
    5/5
    kat-x-

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Yet another great poem,
    so i havent commented for ages.
    ( i should check my favorites more offen!!!)
    the rhyme scheme is great and it flows well.
    love it, love it, love it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This has a really good rhyming scheme, and it flows brilliantly. Welldone. A great use of wording.

    Brad