Wishing You Were Here

by myshiningstar14   Jan 17, 2007


When you lye net,
to me,
we don't have to
speak;
just listening to
the sound of you
breathing next to
me, makes me
weak.

My mind is cracked
appealing,
each ounce revealing,
the memories you've
left behind.

Seeing your smile,
hearing your laugh;
watching you watch me,
as I walk across the room
and missing the way it
feels to be held by you.

Listening to all our
favorite songs,
quietly singing along.
I know it won't be long,
but baby,
it feels so wrong being
here without you next to
me.

It's like I have so much
love deep down inside;
I won't stand and cry;
all I have left to do is
make the best of it,
and sit dreaming,
reminiscing,
and simply wishing you
were here.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    Try not to worry so much. when he comes back you won't have to keep your love in a hold. it'll all be better once everything is back. take care. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    Haha again, I definitely know how you feel. it's so depressing, especially right after they leave...you're just there, and you're like, fvck, not coolll mann. this is good, and as always I can identify with your feelings.

    keep it up

    Tripp

  • 17 years ago

    by Hott Mama

    Great poem, I really liked it. It was emotionally sad and beautiful. Nice work .:*.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    I thought it was great and its a good thing that u wana still carry on afta him not bein there i know its hard and all but yeh i could feel the emotion and great wording keep writin ur good.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really nice poem dear i liked it alot..5/5

    God bless u

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