One Day

by LiisaMariie143   Jan 17, 2007


One Day Youll need me
as i needed you.
One Day youll cry for me
as i cryed for you.
One Day Youll Love me
as i loved you
One Day youll want me
& i wont want you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow good set up for the last line 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Ooo burrrrrn. It was a good poem. Harsh yet good. Fixing it up a bit with the punctuation and such would make it better, but other than that I enjoyed it. I'll give it a four. Question....In your profile you always say ii. I take it that it's related to your name with the double i's. Any particular reason for doing this?

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