Love and Fate.

by Richard T Jr   Jan 17, 2007


Love and hate .
My sweet fate.
This is my new reparation.
In this new generation.
Hear my Revelation.

Love and hate.
Can you relate?
Or are my words to late?

Love and hate.
I'm write at a very fast rate.
To match my beating heart.

Love and hate.
I feel your heart touching mine.
Can't you see I want to call you mine?

Love and hate.
I want feel your lips next to mine.
Than my whole world will be fine.
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Comments please....
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© Copyright 2007 By: Richard Tyree

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  • 17 years ago

    by Heba

    Great job. it really touched me
    thx 4 the ment bye the way. peace out

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I love the repetition and how it reads. Wonderful piece. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Great. it goes quickly, but it is filled with feeling. i love the repeition and the rhyming. its great

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