Broken

by live_vampire   Jan 17, 2007


How come every time i go back out with you i get hurt?
i know i may be stupid but i really do love you.
you say there's a girl thats coming back and still like her.
and that ur not comfortable lying to me about that you don't like her no more.
do you have any clue how bad that hurts me.
ya you still like her and your not comfortable lying 2 me.
i guess you really have changed.
or i guess you haven't.
you still love me but only as a little sis and that you will take care of me.
are you sure you can take care of me?
cause i think this broken heart isnt going to heal right
its not going to heal right with out in my life.
i must of been really stupid going back out with you.
but u are my first love.
i was hoping to spend the rest of my life with you.
guess i wont.
now that we broke up i am just going to have to be sitting thinking about the good times.
hopefully my broken heart will heal but not sure.
if you were to ask me back out i don't what i would say.

I know it sucks but its what i am feeling right now. Please rate and comment and tell me one thing if you don't mind if he was to ask me back out what do ya'll think i should say to him: PLEASE comment.
OK THIS IS 2 THE PEOPLE WHO COMMENTED THIS POEM. THANKS 4 YOUR ADVICE AND WELL WHO EVER SAID THAT I SHOULD GO WITH WHAT MY HEART SAYS WELL THANKS..BECAUSE I DID AND I AM WITH HIM STILL. SO THANKS 4 YOUR COMMENTS AND RATES.

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  • 17 years ago

    by live_vampire

    OK I AM LEAVING A COMMENT ON THIS POEM TO LAURA, SHANIK THE FORGOTTEN,JESSICA AND BRITTANY. THANKS FOR READING THIS POEM AND 2 TELL U 4 THE TRUETH WE GOT BACK 2GETHER 2DAY AT SCHOOL. SO I AM REALLY HAPPY NOW. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT'S AND RATES PEOPLE.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I commend you for laying your feelings out on the line here. it's a great start, but could use another read through to correct a few mispellings. it's a good poem and especially b/c it expresses something difficult that you're going through. reread it and see if you can find your answer within. you know deep down whether or not to go out with him again. hang in there. treat yourself with respect. remember that we teach others how to treat us. you are worthy of someone's love and admiration. you are worth more than second best. you deserve to be loved as much as you love ... chin up. don't let anyone define your worth. define it and own it - you deserve to be adored! hang in there! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like how you wrotet this. i can really relate to what you are saying, and i love poems like that. anyways great job keep it up shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Your poems good it shows feeling and i can relate to it alot! read my poem Im done. i finally got fed up with him but to tell u the truth im with him now! lol its a hard thing to do but the decisions all yours;only u can make it.

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