by Brittany
Your poems good it shows feeling and i can relate to it alot! read my poem Im done. i finally got fed up with him but to tell u the truth im with him now! lol its a hard thing to do but the decisions all yours;only u can make it. |
by Lady Nik
I like how you wrotet this. i can really relate to what you are saying, and i love poems like that. anyways great job keep it up shanik |
by Laura
I commend you for laying your feelings out on the line here. it's a great start, but could use another read through to correct a few mispellings. it's a good poem and especially b/c it expresses something difficult that you're going through. reread it and see if you can find your answer within. you know deep down whether or not to go out with him again. hang in there. treat yourself with respect. remember that we teach others how to treat us. you are worthy of someone's love and admiration. you are worth more than second best. you deserve to be loved as much as you love ... chin up. don't let anyone define your worth. define it and own it - you deserve to be adored! hang in there! :) |
by live_vampire
OK I AM LEAVING A COMMENT ON THIS POEM TO LAURA, SHANIK THE FORGOTTEN,JESSICA AND BRITTANY. THANKS FOR READING THIS POEM AND 2 TELL U 4 THE TRUETH WE GOT BACK 2GETHER 2DAY AT SCHOOL. SO I AM REALLY HAPPY NOW. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT'S AND RATES PEOPLE. |