Awwwwwwwwww this is soooooooo sad =[
but i love it...is this the same one you read to me on the phone?? hmm... if it is it sounds different...well anyway.. great poem!

Excellent poem

Very emotional, good job

So sad...so well written.
Something I can relate to.
I thought the flow was off in places but you made up for that with the depth and emotio in this poem.
Good work!