Cross My Heart

by Lady Vengeance   Jan 17, 2007


Cross my heart,
And hope to die
To you, my friend
I'd never lie

I give my word
I am sincere
When you're in need
I'm always near

Forgiveness now
I beg to pray
I've lied to you
In the worst way

I'm not right there
When you're in need
I've let you down
And let you bleed

The blood did flow
I know for sure
I let it drip
And left it raw

I tried to help
But no avail
A useless friend
Who's bound to fail

You shed your tears
And I cried too
Life's not worth living
Without you

I'll make the time
That you deserve
To laugh with you
And to subserve

Cross my heart
And hope to die
From here on, friend
We shall not cry

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ixora

    Great poem and flow. It hold emotion but vitality as well. Great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by James Held

    This is a great poem i really love this 1 good use of wording love it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by James Held

    This is a really goood poem keep them up
    dont give up, youve got tallrent

    swvral wiked poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Lol, well i did cry. :S
    Beautiful, i dont know what else to sdya really, thanks snoo i needed a helping hand rihgt now .

    A real pick me up.

    *HUG*!

    love
    ~Em
    p.s LOVE YOU!

  • 17 years ago

    by President Dead

    First Thing: The flow is perfect. I like how u coined the "Cross my heart, Hope to die" line into this poem. Very witty. The short lines and stanzas work well with the content, and the rhyme is great too.

    Keep writing, lol

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