First Thing: The flow is perfect. I like how u coined the "Cross my heart, Hope to die" line into this poem. Very witty. The short lines and stanzas work well with the content, and the rhyme is great too.

Keep writing, lol

Lol, well i did cry. :S
Beautiful, i dont know what else to sdya really, thanks snoo i needed a helping hand rihgt now .

A real pick me up.

*HUG*!

love
~Em
p.s LOVE YOU!

This is a really goood poem keep them up
dont give up, youve got tallrent

swvral wiked poems

This is a great poem i really love this 1 good use of wording love it keep it up

Great poem and flow. It hold emotion but vitality as well. Great job 5/5