by Joelle Jan 18, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The moon hovers over the land, being the ever watchful eye. |
by PonderBoy
Never seen it like that, i really liked it |
by WriterX
This poem shows the moon as a creature, and not a "stationary" lifeless object on the sky. An interessting idea which I enjoyed. Only small drawback is the second stanza first line last word. Shouldn't it be "so"? |