Comments : The Moon

  • 17 years ago

    by WriterX

    This poem shows the moon as a creature, and not a "stationary" lifeless object on the sky. An interessting idea which I enjoyed. Only small drawback is the second stanza first line last word. Shouldn't it be "so"?

    WriterX

  • 17 years ago

    by PonderBoy

    Never seen it like that, i really liked it

    well done, keep it up

    5/5