by lashes Jan 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Infected by the power of newness |
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Wow, I love this. It's so deep, & powerful. I loved the wording.. Wonderful choice. The flow was really good. |
by shawn
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This was a very good poem, and deep too, i must admit. |
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Wow.. great choice of words.. and perfect flow.. a little sad but still a really strong poem.. i enjoyed it a lot! |
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Things will forever change and never be the same,sometime change is for the best and for the worst, but your definately right when u say things change. Great poem with great flow 5/5 |