Shadows

by emptysole   Jan 18, 2007


Shadows follow me every step i take
they watch me work,
they see me bath,
the shadows float along the walls,
they scream for freedom,
beg for forgiveness,
but i just cant seem to loose them as hard as i try.
see these shadows are my mistakes

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!..i like the way u've penned it...short but to the point...conveyed the message very clearly with the help of perfect word choice...n the metaphor used was so true...great work
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    Ah...this is good.....it really makes one think because there aer shadows everywhere...nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I like the metaphor here. Although this is short, the message is conveyed in a creative way. I like this! Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Even before your last line i knew it was your mistake, that is really good because you don't need t explain it, it just comes across straight away. laura xxx

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