Even before your last line i knew it was your mistake, that is really good because you don't need t explain it, it just comes across straight away. laura xxx

I like the metaphor here. Although this is short, the message is conveyed in a creative way. I like this! Nice job!

Ah...this is good.....it really makes one think because there aer shadows everywhere...nice job

Wow!!..i like the way u've penned it...short but to the point...conveyed the message very clearly with the help of perfect word choice...n the metaphor used was so true...great work
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