Comments : My beautiful dog

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Aww this is such a sweet poem to your dog, he woulda loved it and i'm sure he knows how much you love and appreciate him. amazing job 5/5 R.I.P chester your the best.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh I loved this, I feel the same way about my dog that I once had that died, and that was about three years ago but I still miss her

  • 17 years ago

    by Namida

    This was a very moving poem. It almost brought tears to my eyes from the emotion put into it. Keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem.. almost makes me cry. I'm so very sorry for your loss... My cat ran away for a week, and I was crying nonstop.. This poem fits my fatso perfectly. If you don't mind I'm going to print this out and put it on my wall. I'm just glad Boo came back. Sorry for your loss... This is a beautiful poem. Your rhyming was amazing.. and your flow was too. I think all you can do is look are the puncuation and grammer.. but that doesnt really matter.. It's beautiful. This part stood out the most to me:

    You licked away my tears, when I cried alone
    You made this house feel more like a home
    You were courageous, nothing brought you down
    Just for being you, you deserve a crown

    I loved you when I met you; I loved you through the years,
    I loved you yesterday morning..I'll love you through my tears

    Beautiful Poem

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Tears were brought to my eyes by your heart wrenching write about your dog. I really get a sense of deep and pure love, flowing forth from your words. I particularly liked these lines,

    You licked away my tears, when I cried alone
    You made this house feel more like a home
    You were courageous, nothing brought you down
    Just for being you, you deserve a crown

    That is exactly what our faithful companions are all about. I mourn your loss, and may you find happier times soon. Best wishes, and blessed be.

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    =[ thats sad thats ahy i dont like pets it hurts just to much when they pass but that was a very good poem hope you keep up the good work....
    STEVE....

  • 17 years ago

    by Bombchelle88

    I love this very heartfelt poem. I, too, have lost my dog and best friend, Chelsea. This was a couple of years ago, but even now I cannot even write this without tears coming to my eyes. She followed me - like a shadow. How I wish that I saw her there behind me right now. I had another doggie best friend (samoyed and akita) - Dude - who helped me get through my parents divorce when I was five. There is nothing that compares to the unconditional love of a dog, for they don't care what you look like, whether you have money, or if you're in a bad mood, they just want to be your friend.
    Sorry for such a long comment. Would you please read/vote on any one of my poems (should I let you in and tell you my secret is about my parents divorce) - thanks, I'd appreciate it. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    That was so sad; I lost someone as well so I know how you feel 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wenche

    I loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Omg...that is so sad. i am so sorry for you...i know how i would feel if my dog passed on!!! i really like it 5/5

    xoxo becca

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Hey I really, really love this poem :(. 'Suppose cuz i lost my beautiful doggy too, on my birthday party, in front of me. I love all animals they make us complete. Don't worry, the pain will go soon, and you'll only remember the good times :)

    Another [crystal] tear |falls|

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    *sniff sniff* this is such a sad poem honey xxx im very sorry you had to write this, you must be hurting so so much. my friends dog got put down last week and i lost a dog at work this week too so this poem really does mean a lot to me and i think you could never have done a better job.
    your words are amazing, you should be truly proud of this poem honey, i know chester would be xxx

    love and hugs xxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    A heartwrenching write, but done so elequently. It's sure to be read by many and open up the flood gates of memories. A friend recently posted a poem relative to the loss of his dog too. It can be read at:

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=891669

    Chin up, bask in the feelings right now, don't fight them off.

    Take care, you'll be in my thoughts.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jake

    This poem is very sad but really rad :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Ohhh this is such a sad poem..but i love it. the rhyming is great and its just really touching. and i can relate to it, it tore me apart when my dog died when i was 12... but its a great write again. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oh Wow...that brought tears to my eyes! I love my dog so much....and i feel for you because i know you must have loved yours so dearly. beautiful poem, very deserving of such a wonderful companion.