Aww this is such a sweet poem to your dog, he woulda loved it and i'm sure he knows how much you love and appreciate him. amazing job 5/5 R.I.P chester your the best. |
by Jenni Marie
Awwh I loved this, I feel the same way about my dog that I once had that died, and that was about three years ago but I still miss her |
by Namida
This was a very moving poem. It almost brought tears to my eyes from the emotion put into it. Keep up the great work! 5/5 |
This poem.. almost makes me cry. I'm so very sorry for your loss... My cat ran away for a week, and I was crying nonstop.. This poem fits my fatso perfectly. If you don't mind I'm going to print this out and put it on my wall. I'm just glad Boo came back. Sorry for your loss... This is a beautiful poem. Your rhyming was amazing.. and your flow was too. I think all you can do is look are the puncuation and grammer.. but that doesnt really matter.. It's beautiful. This part stood out the most to me: |
by x.Athame.x
Tears were brought to my eyes by your heart wrenching write about your dog. I really get a sense of deep and pure love, flowing forth from your words. I particularly liked these lines, |
by emptysole
=[ thats sad thats ahy i dont like pets it hurts just to much when they pass but that was a very good poem hope you keep up the good work.... |
by Bombchelle88
I love this very heartfelt poem. I, too, have lost my dog and best friend, Chelsea. This was a couple of years ago, but even now I cannot even write this without tears coming to my eyes. She followed me - like a shadow. How I wish that I saw her there behind me right now. I had another doggie best friend (samoyed and akita) - Dude - who helped me get through my parents divorce when I was five. There is nothing that compares to the unconditional love of a dog, for they don't care what you look like, whether you have money, or if you're in a bad mood, they just want to be your friend. |
by lala
That was so sad; I lost someone as well so I know how you feel 5/5 |
by Wenche
I loved it |
by xo kisses xo
Omg...that is so sad. i am so sorry for you...i know how i would feel if my dog passed on!!! i really like it 5/5 |
Hey I really, really love this poem :(. 'Suppose cuz i lost my beautiful doggy too, on my birthday party, in front of me. I love all animals they make us complete. Don't worry, the pain will go soon, and you'll only remember the good times :) |
by Baby Rainbow
*sniff sniff* this is such a sad poem honey xxx im very sorry you had to write this, you must be hurting so so much. my friends dog got put down last week and i lost a dog at work this week too so this poem really does mean a lot to me and i think you could never have done a better job. |
A heartwrenching write, but done so elequently. It's sure to be read by many and open up the flood gates of memories. A friend recently posted a poem relative to the loss of his dog too. It can be read at: |
by Jake
This poem is very sad but really rad :) |
by Saving Grace
Ohhh this is such a sad poem..but i love it. the rhyming is great and its just really touching. and i can relate to it, it tore me apart when my dog died when i was 12... but its a great write again. 5/5 |
by Weeping Wolf
Oh Wow...that brought tears to my eyes! I love my dog so much....and i feel for you because i know you must have loved yours so dearly. beautiful poem, very deserving of such a wonderful companion. |