Things Unsaid

by Krzysztof J   Jan 18, 2007


Its time to tell the truth,
I can not hide no more,
Its time to be honest,
And face the world once more.

I chose to hide somethings,
For that I can not lie,
I had to hide these things,
Until the time was right.

I hope you do not hate me,
For what I'm gonna say,
I hope you still care.
And your feelings they will stay.

I said i didn't care,
Girl thats so untrue,
I've never stopped loving you,
And forever I will too.

People said a lot of things,
Stuff that was untrue,
I held it all inside,
I couldn't hurt you too.

I've bottled it all inside me,
This destroyed my heart,
I hope you do not hate me,
That I didn't let it out.

Theres so many things they said,
That i couldn't say to you,
I kept it all inside me,
To try to protect you.

I care about you deeply,
More then you will ever know,
I won't be alive anymore,
If ever you shall go.

You may not see it clear,
Or think that this is true,
But your the ray of sunshine,
That always gets me thru.

I love you more then I can say,
Each day I love you more,
I don't know what it is,
But with you it feels like home.

I've never believed their petty lies,
I have my trust in you,
You were always honest,
That is why I love you.

I hope you do forgive me,
For these things I hide inside,
But its better that I suffer,
Then you cry more each night.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Well said. the ending coaght my i:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really liked this love hurts alot...but this poem was really good 5/5
    *kaila*

  • 18 years ago

    by Olivia

    Thank You for the comment! This poem is very good. I like the emotion, and the rhyming. It's great. Keep doing what you're doing! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "I've never believed their petty lies,
    I have my trust in you,
    You were always honest,
    That is why I love you."

    She has to believe you love her K.
    You've told her so many times through your beautiful words.
    I'm ready to bang her head to knock some sense into her.
    I know she's going through a lot right now but she needs to stop pushing you away.
    When my nan died, i did the same to Marcus until he said something to me.
    He said, "I know your hurting but if you let me in, we're a lot stronger together"
    She needs to realise that!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Ok. first off, I LOVED this poem...all that it was saying was just so easy to relate to for me.
    My only suggestion as far as structure goes....is that you end rhymes are repetitive. You use the word YOU a lot. And sometimes the rhymes...don't really rhyme. Like more and home. But I have to be honest. I truly liked the poem despite that. It was good and from the heart. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for all your nice comments, and much appreciated votes!
    Charisma*

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