Very emotional. Great work.

I like the way u use words in ways they woudn't be used. like that the candle is piece of a roaring bonfire
5/5

Dear Jason,

A very beautiful piece of poetry - conveying so much with such few words. There are so many new perspectives in this piece, it really speaks of remarkable talent.

thank you very much for your comments on my work. I really appreciate the kind words you have to say!

good luck and i am going right on to read more of your stuff.
peace and luck
shobhana