by lala Jan 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Your eyes say everything |
by Bryan
This is very good, i think you have alot of talent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep writng, your talented!!! |
by StephanieH
Short but a beautiful poem, great job! 5/5 |
by Mousie
Oo i liked it! really a nice poem, good wording and stuff, nice job. i liked where it ended, like how you showed how it used to be and now how it is. great job, you've got a talent, keep up the work. |
by Michelle18
Awwwww this is soooo sweet at the beginning and so sad at the end=[ |
by X2892
All i can say is wow n wat an excellent poem u have i give it a 5/5 |